It had not been more than a minute that her cell beep'd .Also it wasn't for the first time that the message was flashing his name.
Several emotions were chasing one another across the soft , unblemished landscape of her thoughts.
She dial'd........
She knew that she wasn't greenhorn unable to follow her instincts but it was childthat resides in her heart , resisting her.
Her heart beats were like dark clouds encroaching , engulfing her landscape of thoughts.She was bemused by the battle she was wagging with her heart.
Words of her friend were constantly nagging her " You are a bit less realistic , try to be more realistic and you will understand that life isn't much complex as you see it"
She had two thoughts in her mind - either he shares her mind or he has appointed a spy. But she already knew that either of them is untrue.
Against the wishes of her conscious mind , her inner wanted to hear to him .
10 digits - distance she needed to cross
Tense 15 seconds , 4 long bells and a "hello" at both ends
Silence
It was broken by her.
In past few months , her heart was moving through deep and silent waters.No one and nothing could make really hurt her.No one and nothing could make her very happy.She was tough which probably is saddest thing about a person you can say .
But nothing was same as before . His voice had elated her .Everything was poised by his voice - which was soothing.There were no more dark clouds in her sky .
When things in life are beautiful , time fleds so fast . 455 seconds and things in life are bounded.They talked as they were used to.
Once he had said " I've really found something today"
But now she says " she had really founded something "
Why The Call ?
Its not merely about the call she made but the call of her innerself which she answered conquering all fears her little heart had.
Its about The Call which told her -
Life is simple - as she is trying to be more realistic
People are good- as she keeps faith in them
Sky is clear- as clouds aren't there
Sun's shining - for shadows to accompany her
And her star - still fighting the darkness
Thanks
Several emotions were chasing one another across the soft , unblemished landscape of her thoughts.
She dial'd........
She knew that she wasn't greenhorn unable to follow her instincts but it was childthat resides in her heart , resisting her.
Her heart beats were like dark clouds encroaching , engulfing her landscape of thoughts.She was bemused by the battle she was wagging with her heart.
Words of her friend were constantly nagging her " You are a bit less realistic , try to be more realistic and you will understand that life isn't much complex as you see it"
She had two thoughts in her mind - either he shares her mind or he has appointed a spy. But she already knew that either of them is untrue.
Against the wishes of her conscious mind , her inner wanted to hear to him .
10 digits - distance she needed to cross
Tense 15 seconds , 4 long bells and a "hello" at both ends
Silence
It was broken by her.
In past few months , her heart was moving through deep and silent waters.No one and nothing could make really hurt her.No one and nothing could make her very happy.She was tough which probably is saddest thing about a person you can say .
But nothing was same as before . His voice had elated her .Everything was poised by his voice - which was soothing.There were no more dark clouds in her sky .
When things in life are beautiful , time fleds so fast . 455 seconds and things in life are bounded.They talked as they were used to.
Once he had said " I've really found something today"
But now she says " she had really founded something "
Why The Call ?
Its not merely about the call she made but the call of her innerself which she answered conquering all fears her little heart had.
Its about The Call which told her -
Life is simple - as she is trying to be more realistic
People are good- as she keeps faith in them
Sky is clear- as clouds aren't there
Sun's shining - for shadows to accompany her
And her star - still fighting the darkness
Thanks
5 comments:
hii
thatz was soo gr8 friend.. ur really a good poet .. :) , the use of mobile was cool in that.. . the pic is cool too .. the pic gave clearly the idea of wat she was thinking :) , but she has pretty smile face .. i think she should hav worried face ... anyways it was nice .. keep posting ... one day u will get a award :P .........
Never thought a 7.5 min conversation can be expressed so beautifully, and the befitting sketch makes it even better. Its a wonderful composition.
@Krithik
inbetween award for what ? venting out feeling ? or frustrations? anyways leave this bhak !
@ rk deepak
Somethings in lfe we never understand or say sometimes in life we understand things ...its all so eerie! still thanx for d praise I dont deserve
Good words.
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